And thankyou for the feedback, that's just the kind of constructive criticism I was after! You're right; I really need some more description of previous moves, or maybe have them make some moves in their current game before turning over Jamie. Hmm...
![[community profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/community.png){kind=small}
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
timeasmymeasure
no subject
Date: 2007-12-18 11:15 am (UTC)And thankyou for the feedback, that's just the kind of constructive criticism I was after! You're right; I really need some more description of previous moves, or maybe have them make some moves in their current game before turning over Jamie. Hmm...